tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3397536281585357054.post1012281413383509997..comments2023-10-02T11:10:32.800-04:00Comments on Through The Never: VariationsLucas Pedersonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13072101177732602824noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3397536281585357054.post-39568405709142982572007-01-10T00:27:00.000-05:002007-01-10T00:27:00.000-05:00Christina, I'm not exactly sure how to provde the ...Christina, I'm not exactly sure how to provde the link you speaking of. I'm still really new at this yet.Lucas Pedersonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13072101177732602824noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3397536281585357054.post-66616803116605700762007-01-09T23:49:00.000-05:002007-01-09T23:49:00.000-05:00Wow, look you have sparked a big interest in the a...Wow, look you have sparked a big interest in the assignments too. <br /><br />Are you going to add a link back to everyone who has tried this so readers can see who played around with it?LoveRundlehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01177659277273835858noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3397536281585357054.post-15359326540912456422007-01-09T19:25:00.000-05:002007-01-09T19:25:00.000-05:00Susan, it's too bad you can't give this a try. I b...Susan, it's too bad you can't give this a try. I bet you would have come up with something interesting.<br />Rach! Thanks for stopping by and the kind words.Lucas Pedersonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13072101177732602824noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3397536281585357054.post-45618360877922901972007-01-09T19:23:00.000-05:002007-01-09T19:23:00.000-05:00Thanks for giving it a try Bird! I can't wait to s...Thanks for giving it a try Bird! I can't wait to see what you come up with. It's interesting the avenues one can take with a basic idea set into motion and then made better. I think I will do at least one of these, "Variations" assignment a month. Every month there will be a different, what I call, blueprint story posted here on my blog. I hope this helps folks discover just how deep their river of words flow. And how shocking their imagination and creativity explode to life on the page.Lucas Pedersonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13072101177732602824noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3397536281585357054.post-59946940191040149342007-01-09T18:39:00.000-05:002007-01-09T18:39:00.000-05:00Hey, thanks for stopping by! I like this story, an...Hey, thanks for stopping by! I like this story, and I think I will add to it. It may even be posted on my blog within the next couple of days.Bird on a Wirehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03399412029059144836noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3397536281585357054.post-92222203844814430112007-01-08T19:15:00.000-05:002007-01-08T19:15:00.000-05:00this a great idea...I enjoyed reading the continua...this a great idea...I enjoyed reading the continuation at stewart sternberg and your beginning is brilliant also.Rachel Schellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08993337201786554035noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3397536281585357054.post-62887334046044231492007-01-08T09:20:00.000-05:002007-01-08T09:20:00.000-05:00Okay..I've posted my continuation.Okay..I've posted my continuation.Stewart Sternberg (half of L.P. Styles)https://www.blogger.com/profile/00895152179113722902noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3397536281585357054.post-29091316514050982112007-01-08T06:40:00.000-05:002007-01-08T06:40:00.000-05:00Lucas, I would like to give this a try and knew ri...Lucas, I would like to give this a try and knew right away where I would go with it, but then...I'm on some sort of craziness with my current story which thankfully only contains about three to four more chapters. Right now I'm feeling relief that it will soon be over.<br /><br />Maybe I'll take a stab at this when my current story is done.<br /><br />Thank you for the comments.Susan Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05566328070072489203noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3397536281585357054.post-38250139929305445532007-01-07T22:18:00.000-05:002007-01-07T22:18:00.000-05:00Christina, thanks for the good words. When I wrote...Christina, thanks for the good words. When I wrote this particular piece I wasn't expecting anyone to like it. Really I thought it would be fun to see what people come up with. Too bad you can't give it a try. That's okay, there'll be more.<br />Josh! Buddy! Thanks for stopping by and thanks a lot for the support. If ever I become a published writer, you better hook me up, I'll need all the help I can get! :-) Catch ya later, man!<br />Thanks for giving this a try, Stewart! I think in the end it might surprise you. I've written two versions of this story. The one posted and another in my journal. Both are similar in structure, but different as far story goes. I hope folks will at least give it shot. What can it hurt?Lucas Pedersonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13072101177732602824noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3397536281585357054.post-62497114940436027302007-01-07T20:00:00.000-05:002007-01-07T20:00:00.000-05:00You know, it's difficult getting people to take on...You know, it's difficult getting people to take on assignments. I did a few of them, posting my own stuff before anyone joined me. <br /><br />Actually, I didn't care at the time. I was going to be doing the assignments anyway, along with my writers group in Chesterfield, so posting them on the blog was more of a convenience thing. I was actually sort of surprised when some people stepped up and started with them.<br /><br />Actually, participation depends on the subject of the assignment. The current one is a toughie, and so you may not see that many people deciding to take it on. Seduction and Weird Addiction...pushed buttons I guess.Stewart Sternberg (half of L.P. Styles)https://www.blogger.com/profile/00895152179113722902noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3397536281585357054.post-47708665282729750062007-01-07T19:56:00.000-05:002007-01-07T19:56:00.000-05:00I like this. I'll play with it a bit and perhaps ...I like this. I'll play with it a bit and perhaps do a version...I'll let you know. Right now...meds. Head fuzzy. <br /><br />Peace.Stewart Sternberg (half of L.P. Styles)https://www.blogger.com/profile/00895152179113722902noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3397536281585357054.post-50594602999542182992007-01-07T16:46:00.000-05:002007-01-07T16:46:00.000-05:00Dude, I don't think i have ever told you this but ...Dude, I don't think i have ever told you this but YOU NEED TO BE A WRITER! That is awesome. Its one of the best things i have read of yours and its just a little story. Keep at it man you got something!!!! And if i ever get on the radio in gonna promote the hell out of you!!!Joshhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13047799262123600183noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3397536281585357054.post-17117032758881186732007-01-06T22:19:00.000-05:002007-01-06T22:19:00.000-05:00This is an interesting story because you don't see...This is an interesting story because you don't see to many from an animal's point of view, at least not to many books I've picked up. Good work on characterization. At first I thought Chomper had gone hunting. I didn't expect him to attack a human. I feel very sorry for Donkey who has to take all that abuse.<br /><br />I would take a swing at this, but I'm horrible when it comes to writing animal POVs. I hope other people take your challenge though, it will be fun to see what stories you get from this.LoveRundlehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01177659277273835858noreply@blogger.com