tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3397536281585357054.post3838358710214564325..comments2023-10-02T11:10:32.800-04:00Comments on Through The Never: Ice Mountain: Part 4Lucas Pedersonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13072101177732602824noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3397536281585357054.post-77343524440802506192007-08-04T07:11:00.000-04:002007-08-04T07:11:00.000-04:00I'm curious which way the story will go. Don't men...I'm curious which way the story will go. Don't mention it. I like stopping by.Fabhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11727490011876675399noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3397536281585357054.post-32196187606386126862007-08-03T21:12:00.000-04:002007-08-03T21:12:00.000-04:00Charles, thanks buddy! Wow! I don't think I've eve...Charles, thanks buddy! Wow! I don't think I've ever had anyone say that awhat I wrote rocked. Sweet! Means a lot!<BR/>Oh, and a hint, the multipule personality thing has somethign to do with the poison.<BR/><BR/>Travis, Thanks m'man! Great to see you back here!<BR/><BR/>Fab, eerie? I think it's down right frightning! Knowing you are you, but there's someone else, or something else inside you that thinks it's you. Yeah, frightening indeed. Thanks! As for the boy, we need to delve futher into this story to find out, my friend. Even I have no idea what has become of her son. Thanks again! And I am gratefyul fro your willingness to keep reading this little ayrn of mine. <BR/><BR/>Etain, cool. Yeah, I wanted to make it clear that there were two seperate people toiling in Sarah. As I read it over I see your point. The inner/outter thing is a little excessive. Thanks for cathing that! And thank you so much for coming back to read! Amazing? Well, I wouldn't go that far, let's just say I try. Thanks!Lucas Pedersonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13072101177732602824noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3397536281585357054.post-36615263649611789212007-08-03T09:35:00.000-04:002007-08-03T09:35:00.000-04:00For me it is jumping to much between inner and out...For me it is jumping to much between inner and outer...don't mention inner/outer so much, give them each their won personality that the reader in figures alon the line that it is one person.....just an idea.<BR/>You write amazing stuff:)Drizelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16746480963316566816noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3397536281585357054.post-11514312509601374342007-08-02T04:07:00.000-04:002007-08-02T04:07:00.000-04:00What a eerie thing to experience. She's like two d...What a eerie thing to experience. She's like two different persons all of a sudden. <BR/><BR/>So the boy gets mentioned again. Did he suffer the same thing? ... waiting for part 5, eagerly.Fabhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11727490011876675399noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3397536281585357054.post-54607380566325769452007-08-01T21:32:00.000-04:002007-08-01T21:32:00.000-04:00I'm with Charles. This direction is fascinating.I'm with Charles. This direction is fascinating.Travis Codyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06192526507760146748noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3397536281585357054.post-64314033818424195052007-08-01T00:02:00.000-04:002007-08-01T00:02:00.000-04:00Now this rocks. I like it a lot. Sounds like a b...Now this rocks. I like it a lot. Sounds like a bit of doppleganger action, or perhaps a multiple personality event. Either way, or some other way, this is promising.Charles Gramlichhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02052592247572253641noreply@blogger.com